Each year she wrote me a piece of art; A poem as a birthday present. How can I capture this friendship in words? She pairs restraint with an open heart. My poems are dull, hers are luminescent. Each year she wrote me a piece of art. I was cruel to her once, words sharp as a dart. Compared to her Iām a moral peasant. How can I capture this friend in words? She's humble, wholesome, passionate and smart, Her children she's raised to be lively and decent. Each year she wrote me a piece of art. The friendship remains though we live far apart, Even throughout my mental descent. How can I capture this friendship in words? Fire nor floods can tear her apart, Her quiet strength is always present. Each year she wrote me a piece of art. How can I capture this friend in words?
This poem was written for my Excellent Friend. You can read her poem here http://outofthecave.blog/2021/02/10/resilience/ or check out her entire blog if you enjoy poetry.
absolutely beautiful; both in thought and form; I’ve only written a few villanelles: they are tricky; you’ve done really well !!!!
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